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Open Poetry #39

Angel of the Sea

tek
Junior Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 32
Austin, USA

0 posted 2006-11-30 01:50 PM

dark, on the edge of the water
sun set deep on the edge of the misty water
waves crash on the sands of my despair
full moon creeps over my shoulder to greet the night
fog rolls in to engulf my ever being
riptide pulls me down, slowly
i am helpless
i cross my chest and pray to the Loving Lady
to save my soul from the drowning pool
wait!
from the dense fog a light appears,
calming the seas and gives me a peace
a peace i had never felt in my entire existence
and then i saw her
She had answered my prayer
an angel floated above me, smiling
a soft, re-assuring hand on my shoulder
then she lifted me up and held me close
worry not my love, you are safe now.
it was then my life was saved and my eyes opened
she possesses my very soul
there is no other love to feel or see
thanthe love I have found in the Angel of the Sea.

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

1 posted 2006-11-30 02:24 PM

ver y good visuals....wow i like this alot

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2006-11-30 03:00 PM

This is gr8!
SEA is an angel, too

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2006-11-30 03:14 PM

A beautiful romantic write, deeply captivating.
Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2006-11-30 05:15 PM

Wonderful...James

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2006-11-30 05:20 PM

Very beautiful write. Even the outline of your words reminds me of an angel.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2006-11-30 07:18 PM

Tek~
You leave soft sighs~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

tek
Junior Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 32
Austin, USA

7 posted 2006-12-01 09:26 AM

thank you all, i appreciate it.

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