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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. lying down beside him— at night her ghost touches his back— and sighs . |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oooooh. Chillingly lovely. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
this is absolutely perfect...I have been that ghost and that woman...take care |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A whole story behind these few words! Well done! Love, Margherita  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
John, I love this! Be well Roniece |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, there is a story and a chill behind these few words - well done! |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you I seem to touch something on the periphery The South Africans and Australians, with a few Americans, like the Japanese, seem to recognize that being classically sentimental is not stupid but something preciously human. Thanks again. John . |
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stevepoet Junior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 46 |
nice. |
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