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CastleGuard
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0 posted 2006-11-30 12:46 PM



a tight silk blouse
dyadic invitation
accept eyes heretical


CG

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Margherita
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1 posted 2006-11-30 03:35 PM


Stirring, yet also disquieting!

Love,
Margherita

CastleGuard
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2 posted 2006-11-30 04:16 PM



Thank you, and yes, I understand your concern.

Sometimes the eyes will betray, before the mind will catch up and correct the 'trespass' with a fleeting discretion, most likely in a few moments forgotten.

To me, the greatest 'draw' on a woman is her smile. Yet, I will not be hypocritical as not to admit that sometimes the eyes will be drawn elsewhere...

CG



The Lady
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3 posted 2006-11-30 04:52 PM


yes disquieting but
was there a trespass here CG?

I struggle with the sacred
and profane eternally


CastleGuard
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4 posted 2006-11-30 05:21 PM



The Lady - I believe that struggle is not that uncommon...myself included.

The 'trespass' is in the eyes of the beholder ..LOL.., in the sense, that the eyes breached the picket fence of the mind, if only for a moment. Yet, I would hope that that in itself...is not a bad thing.

CG



passing shadows
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5 posted 2006-12-01 12:07 PM


I see

glad to have been able to share in this

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2006-12-02 05:41 AM


I like this... I'm not sure about the trespassing though

Be well
Roniece

The Lady
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7 posted 2006-12-02 11:14 PM




CG

thanks for your thoughts on thei
"touchy" subject

Kate


trutodaraiders
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8 posted 2006-12-02 11:37 PM


Castle does dyadic mean 2? For some reason I am not understandingl please forgive my ignorance.

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~



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