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Open Poetry #39

11 Sep 01

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

0 posted 2006-09-11 05:44 PM

God cried silently
When new Angels approached Him
A kiss one by one

[This message has been edited by marcel (09-11-2006 07:39 PM).]

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
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1 posted 2006-09-11 09:49 PM

Senryu are so good........ that touch of humanity within what otherwise would have been only the general theorem of a haiku, can add so very much.

I'm glad I stopped to read this one, Sept. 11 or no.

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2006-09-11 11:34 PM

The soft touch of a poets heart filled this seeping day, and I found a good thought left with me in the artist's voice.
Keeper.
TD

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