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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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who wears these chains of ice who wraps the willows in iron and makes them bow to earth what voice is that of winter that speaks to the sun and moves her from her halo who strums the dirge’s psalms and puts nipples on the oceans then freezes them to razors to cut the throats of skys when they lean to offer love but bleed their storms instead who is this in december's melancholy _____________ daark scribblenote: well digger's back side, witch's bosom and a motherinlaws heart..it is only gonna be 60 here at the beach today..now that is nearly blizzard conditions..(prozac moment) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, there's that picture, too... You should be here... 60 would be considered just warmin' up...  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun..figured I would get a rise out of you and some others..thanks lady friend |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Okay, I'll bite. Who? |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Great visions and great poetic performance! ... but 60 means just 16 Celsius and so California and Central Italy enjoy the same nice weather ... You still can take a bath! brrrrrrrrrr Love, Margherita  |
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superbee New Member
since 2006-11-28
Posts 7USA |
I love your scribble note here.....what I would do with my ex mother in laws heart!!! LOL  Superbee |
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superbee New Member
since 2006-11-28
Posts 7USA |
I second super bee....her heart delivered by the woodsman post haste!!!! LOL Superbee |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Ok my roomamte just signed up for a membership and we never logged him off....so I have been replying as superbee....lol duh!! Julie anyway loved the post and the footnote!!! kingsangel |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend interloper, thanks for the read.. ______________ ms mar' yep, I have my fleece lined surfboard cover on as we speak..thanks for the eyes ______________ ms jul and roomy, thanks for the eyes and the duh, ..jul you are my kind of girl |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
It was sixty here today, and would have been a real nice day for a dip....  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger darlin' it's colder than the proverbial witch's bosom here too no way to run a desert need something to keep you warm? great poem |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms G, thanks for the warm smile ________________ ladyone, sure...whatcha got in your mittens? thanks babe |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I don't do Winter well, but I'm thinking you keep writing like this and I might just succumb! loved this!Be well Roniece |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms bruce, my hands are warm if you care to spend a moment longer...thanks ms |
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