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The Breakup |
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MsSouthernOrchid Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 192 |
The Breakup _____ She traced the outline of his name in the sand with her toe, not knowing what to say as she silently watched him go. She glanced at his retreating form as he hurried down the beach, his image growing fainter until he was out of reach. A tear fell down her cheek as she slipped a ring from her finger. She tossed the ring into the water, then turned to leave, no need to linger. The ring washed out to sea guided by a gentle wave, and now on the ocean floor, the ring lays in it's silent grave. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Soulful, the tears of the sea. Well done. TD |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
it is like we are sometimes meant to meet to fall apart..nice write |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 goshthis is good! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautifully sad and bittersweet, yet the poem was done well |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Eloquent... Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
excellent MsSouthernOrchid heartbreaker |
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