Open Poetry #39 |
Moonlight On The Bay |
sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Moonlight On The Bay Beside the rustic harbor stands a lighthouse on a hill It keeps a watchful vigil o’er the waters deep and still At night the harbor waters shine almost as bright as day And nothing is as beautiful as moonlight on the bay The shores stretch out their golden arms along the rugged land And the waters seem to sing and dance across the golden sand A cool and salty ocean breeze blows softly through my hair As tiny sparkling water droplets gently fill the air I stand next to the water's edge and listen while it sings The water seems to know the gentle comfort that it brings I long to have you at my side beside the shining sea While listening as the water brings your image back to me Though we are very far apart I still can see your smiles As the water whispers soft and sweet across the many miles I hear your sparkling laughter and it softly seems to say “I love you”, and it fills my heart like moonlight on the bay |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is absolutely beautiful, the rhyme and flow is so mesmerizing. Nicely done! Welcome to Passions, enjoyed your entrance post and will assuredly be looking for more. I hope you enjoy your time here, at PIPS. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There will be several poets here who will applaud your work and welcome you to Passions. Let me be one of them. Welcome! Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! A most beautiful entrance post. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Very lyrical first poem. Welcome to Passions. TD |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
applauding got more? welcome |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Thank you all for the warm greetings, I look forward to getting to know all of you better. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Steve~ Welcome to the warm circle of poetic friendship here at PiP~ I have visited your site and look forward to reading more of your work~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Welcome to PIP. Beautiful poem! |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Well hi there Steve... Welcome to Passions. Hope you stay here a while so the folks can see the beauty you write. As you already know. You are one of my favorites. Hugs Bonnie j aka BonBon |
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Spike Daft Junior Member
since 2006-09-12
Posts 23CA, USA |
Beautiful. Your skillful rhyming structure and rythm really lend a lot to this wonderful piece. Grey Matter Custom Images |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Hello Bonnie, it is nice to see a familiar name, especially when it is one of my favorite people. Thank you for the kind words, I'm looking forward to meeting some great writers I haven't seen before. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Thanks for the kind comments Spike, I appreciate it. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Troy Member
since 2006-06-04
Posts 52B.C. |
Excellent Post. Fluent rhyme not just in words but also in meaning! |
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