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Open Poetry #39

through my eyes

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

0 posted 2006-11-27 03:36 PM

Through my eyes the clouds
put on a picture show for us
through my eyes the stars
entertain us with their dance
through my eyes the darkness
becomes our light
in which only we can see
through my eyes
the sky becomes our blanket
to be laid out before us
to make love upon
for only our eyes
through my heart
the world becomes yours
as long as we stay the course

kingsangel

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2006-11-27 03:53 PM

Through my eyes I read a gr8 write

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2006-11-27 04:05 PM

ms jul's enjoyed this romantica

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2006-11-28 01:34 AM

Thru my eyes... I like what I read!

Be well
Roniece

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

4 posted 2006-11-28 07:40 AM

Interloper...thank you I maglad you liked it

Dark....romance recaptured through my heart..thanx for reading

Roniece....my poetry read all way over there in the land down under....I couldn't be more flattered....ahh the web what a wonderful thing.....

kingsangel

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2006-11-28 03:37 PM

the world becomes yours
as long as we stay the course

Beautifully said!

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