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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-11-27 07:29 AM



you knew the door was always open
and my reasons never did have strings
or even part time bars

you said that was the sad part
of being a woman sometimes
the good was too good to believe

and the bad was so much better
you said the rain on the windows
made you want to run outside

and get to know god again
like you did before men
but you were afraid of getting wet

or losing your footprints in the sand
_______________

daark



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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2006-11-27 07:52 AM


Don't you know about issuing
hankie alerts?

This one can be a tear jerker
under the right eyes.

It's beautiful.


Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2006-11-27 07:55 AM


ms sun, must be raining again in socal?  thanks lady
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2006-11-27 07:56 AM


methinks you know me well today


Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2006-11-27 07:56 AM


Beautiful, Stranger....
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2006-11-27 07:59 AM


ms dixie, perhaps on occasion?

thanks hon

________________

ms gs, thanks donna for the touch

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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6 posted 2006-11-27 03:55 PM


We all need footprints to find our way home...But where is home....?
PS love the title...

kingsangel

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2006-11-27 04:05 PM


ms jul..home is where the footprints turn around in circles they say

thannks for the read

The Lady
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8 posted 2006-11-27 04:49 PM




Stranger darlin'

bad is so much better
and the rain on the windows
calls me

I'm not afraid of getting wet

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2006-11-27 04:59 PM


ladyone..my favorite attire for a lady..moisture and eyes, thanks babe
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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10 posted 2006-11-27 08:40 PM


I love this write of yours!  I love being bad and I'm not afraid of getting wet either!   Enjoyed

Be well
Roniece

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2006-11-28 07:06 AM


ms bruce, I shall have the limo pick you up at sunset then?  (grin) thanks ms
passing shadows
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displaced
12 posted 2006-11-28 07:52 AM


damn
had to come back to here

I think I'll stay awhile

Dark Stranger
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13 posted 2006-11-28 09:04 AM


ms dixie...please stay as long as you can stand it, thanks lady
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