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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2006-11-25 11:15 AM



spilling ink in nature's garden
turning yellow to dark grey
storm will blow my hair in chaos
soppy feet by mudded clay

trees are bending bolded heads
wind is cleaning up the path
I retreat to such a force
think I'll have a hot, warm bath

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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MsSouthernOrchid
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1 posted 2006-11-25 11:24 AM


A vivid picture of just before the storm. Enjoyed this one much.
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2 posted 2006-11-25 02:49 PM


Titia~
You are such a dear, dear poet~

I actually could feel the winds through your versed thoughts~

Momma Muys wrote me this morning that the weather was truly awful and that she couldn't take her scooter out~
What a gal~

Love you lady~
I sure do~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Angel4aKing
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3 posted 2006-11-25 05:32 PM


We are having a new bathtub installed at this very moment I can't wait to soak!!!! I love this!!!!

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JamesMichael
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4 posted 2006-11-25 07:34 PM


Enjoyed...James
Titia Geertman
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5 posted 2006-11-26 11:02 AM


And I don't even have a bath
I think I made a grammar mistake here, shouldn't it be retreate from in stead of retreat to???

Thanks anyway for the kind replies.

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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