Open Poetry #39 |
Surrender's Residue |
icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
. river stones in time each worn to conformity once had character ©2006 by icebox . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sad but true |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sunny, warm, flat stones yield nothing to wading feet looking for repose. Was reminded of this when I read yours. Guess I'm a nonconformist....*smiles*. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I don't do these, but for YOU, I'll try: Two trees in the night, they scratched fingernails in white-- Africa's asleep. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
cornerstones of life dug up in name of progress the past tossed aside |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Lovely, short poem. The thought is magnificent. you should write for trams. Kethry a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox....yet, would you blame the river? |
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