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when laughter's gone!
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when laughter's gone! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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On Cultural Entropy ('Runaway American Dream' II) ['war is hell....and life is war...certainly you must expect 'casualties'?!] When beaten up and beaten down even the 'clown'...forsakes the clown for nothing's right...and nothing's left when the laughter's gone except more human debris and so the mind dies of starvation amid the finest collection of cultural 'junk food' ever assembled.... and, the final joke is on us but the 'living dead' cannot acknowledge! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Excellent meter and interesting construction SHDP...A rather glum outlook which I pictured in my mind as long miles in the freezing rain...skidding around the loop in heavy traffic! Lots to digest, and think about here. Many fantastic lines here. |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
the final joke is on us but the 'living dead' cannot acknowledge! Siyo Secondhanddreampoet this hard truth brought to me tears of grief for us all,it is my hope we can repair before it is this!
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
secondhanddreampoet LOL I do believe the jelly apple will persist. |
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