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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. It’s odd How a shade or two In tone can change a scene That this dusk light Filtered through summer leaves Should suddenly reveal Someone I hadn’t known before Was alive You sit on the lawn Looking small and frail The day’s last reflections In your amber hair That flows over shoulders Down arms and breasts . . . From the past to now On every woman I see . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
perfect! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely indeed!!  Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes, I agree, a good write! Be well Roniece |
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DejaEntendu Member
since 2005-12-06
Posts 82Pennsylvania |
I always enjoy your work. I especially like the into paragraph, I think that sums it up best. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
gr8 write |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
How i missed one of your marvelous writings. it is beautiful. From a surprise to a daily scene, the mind just smoothly flowed. where were you when you saw this? not in every place you can have the feeling that somebody is suddenly alive. my hairs are standing like over grown grass now. |
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