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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2006-11-24 09:28 AM

Repost:

Youth’s Legatee

There is a path I walked upon
In my youth and now long gone
A rainbow path of colored seat
Of candy dreams and misty sweet

A valley filled with daffodil
With singing of the whippoorwill
And Spanish moss in nightly toss
With fireflies that lit the course

With moonlights silver snowy flare
And golden glint within your hair
With dancing leaves in make believe
And touch less touch of hearts receive

I found the path I knew was there
And everything is still as fair
You have not changed a moment’s store
Your beauty stays forever more

You are my youth’s legatee the
Forever of my youthful see

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2006-11-24 12:06 PM

Just lovely Seymour. Thankyou for reposting this gem. hugs,Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
Carl Sandburg

Pressie
Member

since 2006-11-14

Posts 157
Oklahoma

2 posted 2006-11-24 12:20 PM

Seymour,

I always look forward to reading your poetry.

The ease of your rhyme speaks a sweet caress that I find most envious.

Thanks for sharing!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2006-11-24 12:24 PM

This is so beautiful and wistful Sy.
Good to see you here today!
I'm hoping you had a good Thanksgiving Day.
Now relax and enjoy the rest of the weekend.

&

, Nancy

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2006-11-24 02:50 PM

Chris,
Thank you dear, I hope you had a nice thanksgiving.

Pressie
Thank you for the nce reply.

Nancy,
I'll do my best, thank you sweet.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2006-11-26 11:11 AM

For an extremely 'visual' person and penultimate 'incurable romantic' such as I,
this 'write' is as good as it gets!...for specific example:

"A valley filled with daffodil
With singing of the whippoorwill
And Spanish moss in nightly toss
With fireflies that lit the course

With moonlights silver snowy flare
And golden glint within your hair"

and, once again...lines such as:

"With moonlights silver snowy flare"

...are virtually entire poems in and of themselves!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2006-11-26 05:15 PM

secondhanddreampoet
Your replies are a delight to read and I appreciate their depth

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

7 posted 2006-11-27 02:33 PM

oh Sir Sy
I think I saw this place
once upon a dream
a long time ago
thank you for taking me back

it's lovely

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2006-11-27 03:02 PM

gr8 write, Sy

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2006-11-27 03:57 PM

Lady
Thank you for this lovely comment.

Interloper
Thank you my friend.

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