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PEBBLES Member
since 2006-10-30
Posts 69South Australia, Australia |
Baffling words tumble through my mind. Reflections of darkness hover. A disturbing peacefulness stands still time and inside myself, I take cover. What would it be like to stay here forever to be lost in an endless maze Not knowing, not seeing, not ever screaming out my silent rage. HelenIL. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Hey Pebbles, I like your rage. I reminds me vaguely of the Dylan Thomas. Welcome to poetry and all of its wonderful weaving of emotions into words. regards Kethry a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Helen, this is an enjoyable read and I do agree with Kethry |
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PEBBLES Member
since 2006-10-30
Posts 69South Australia, Australia |
Thank you Friends. Looking forward to a long and fruitful relationship. Helen |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Baffling words tumble through my mind. Reflections of darkness hover. A disturbing peacefulness stands still time and inside myself, I take cover. What would it be like to stay here forever to be lost in an endless maze Not knowing, not seeing, not ever screaming out my silent rage. HelenIL Siyo Helen the poem is beautiful,the hurt a painful thing to my spirit!
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PEBBLES Member
since 2006-10-30
Posts 69South Australia, Australia |
Thank you so much for your compassion. Your kind words are like a gentle balm on my soul. Very best wishes to three very fine writers. Helen. |
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