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What You Have Taken From Me
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What You Have Taken From Me |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
Thanks to all those who read my poems... here we go, What you've taken from me You've taken my heart away with just your eyes you've taken my mind from me with just one touch everynight i wonder what would you take from me with a kiss? you've taken my faith away with just one smile you made me cry when i saw tears falling everynight i wonder what would you take from me if you told me i love you but i guess it's not happening soon since i'm sure that your heart belongs to someone else but i wish that one day you will be mine so that you can give me back what you have taken from me |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 awww, this is sad |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
it is a very sad write - but a good one! I hope the sun smiles on you again soon. Be well Roniece |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
as always, thanks for reading..it really helps me to keep writing! Thanks! Denis. |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
A sad but romantic write...  Hey..you might be stealing something away from someone you know...lolx enjoyed. FNG |
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PEBBLES Member
since 2006-10-30
Posts 69South Australia, Australia |
You have raised an issue that I have restled with for a while. Enjoyed. Thanks Helen. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I wonder what might have been lost too, before love was gained. Good job. Kethry a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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