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DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2006-11-22 11:20 PM



Thanks to all those who read my poems...

here we go,


What you've taken from me

You've taken my heart away
with just your eyes
you've taken my mind from me
with just one touch
everynight i wonder
what would you take from me
with a kiss?

you've taken my faith away
with just one smile
you made me cry
when i saw tears falling

everynight i wonder
what would you take from me
if you told me
i love you

but i guess
it's not happening soon
since i'm sure
that your heart belongs to someone else
but i wish
that one day you will be mine
so that you can give me back
what you have taken from me


© Copyright 2006 Denis-DreamerSpirit - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2006-11-22 11:31 PM


awww, this is sad
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2006-11-23 12:04 PM


it is a very sad write - but a good one!
I hope the sun smiles on you again soon.

Be well
Roniece

DreamerSpirit
Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina
3 posted 2006-11-23 06:11 PM


as always, thanks for reading..it really helps me to keep writing!

Thanks!

Denis.

FNG
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since 2006-02-07
Posts 477

4 posted 2006-11-24 05:42 AM


A sad but romantic write...

Hey..you might be stealing something away from someone you know...lolx

enjoyed.

FNG

PEBBLES
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since 2006-10-30
Posts 69
South Australia, Australia
5 posted 2006-11-24 06:07 AM


You have raised an issue that I have restled with for a while. Enjoyed. Thanks Helen.
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
6 posted 2006-11-24 06:49 AM


I wonder what might have been lost too, before love was gained.
Good job.
Kethry

a good commitee can decimate communication.

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