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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2006-11-22 07:25 PM


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Looking out
Over a battlefield—
About to be

A warrior
Brushes the arrows
In his quiver
With the back of his hand


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© Copyright 2006 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
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1 posted 2006-11-23 09:30 PM


John,

as always
your touch to a poem
is a quiver to a heart.

Well done.


passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2006-11-24 12:56 PM


always love to read you
Huan Yi
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3 posted 2006-11-24 01:37 PM



Thank you both

John

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2006-11-24 06:56 PM


Enjoyed...James
Drauntz
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5 posted 2007-05-14 11:01 PM


wow, this is good. very powerful and manly.

enjoyed

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