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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2006-09-11 07:30 AM

In Midstream

Come with me,

when I          day a dream
against some invisible plate of
next come to me,
the flight path’s gateway
opens.

When I am still, and moment’s day
is streaming in some midlight

it becomes song moment
of wonder

that flits, flutters, scampers.

They are quick, God’s creatures,
who seem to tease one’s
peripheral vision

because
if you try to see them
                       as if they were dusty fairies

you won’t.

But from the corner of your sight

              rainbows gleam, upon feathered wing
                       and breath-spread flight

in midstream.

Like some scream of white,
fluttering against some
pane of stream.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2006-09-11 08:02 AM

ms sun, can see you here
your mind play is candy
enjoyed it

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2006-09-11 08:53 AM

I can see rainbows streaming and birds in flight....oh how beautiful a scene this morning you have painted MommaK. HUGS

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2006-09-11 09:34 AM

I see them! I SEE them!

Oh I do like this poetic current in you...you've found a whole new richness to bless our eyes!

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Sunkissed
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

4 posted 2006-09-11 12:51 PM

Very nicely penned, Miss K.

Enjoyed!

~Sunkissed.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2006-09-11 01:02 PM

Sissie...I did come with you....enchanting how that happens with your poetry. Tis a blessing you give.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2006-09-11 01:32 PM

"if you try to see them
                       as if they were dusty fairies

you won’t.

But from the corner of your sight

              rainbows gleam, upon feathered wing
                       and breath-spread flight"

SIL, I know what you speak of and this is beautiful!  *hugs*....jo

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

7 posted 2006-09-11 01:52 PM

Beautiful write and we should all pay attention to the corners of our sight. Maybe a few more will now after reading you.

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

8 posted 2006-09-11 02:15 PM

I sense them everytime, and off they go . . . into your beautiful poetry!

H, Robert

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

9 posted 2006-09-11 10:59 PM

I did come with you
Karilea
and the beauty was unfathomable...

sewasham
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since 2006-09-11

Posts 714
Oklahoma, USA

10 posted 2006-09-11 11:03 PM

You really painted a beautiful picture with your words. A real delight to read. Take care and Have fun. Steve

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

11 posted 2006-09-12 12:13 PM

I spied with ma little eye...

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

12 posted 2006-09-17 10:05 PM

Of course you did, Mysteria. You always could.

Thank you all for reading, enjoying...
dreaming.

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