Open Poetry #39 |
pale dog pretties |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
the bound sounds of down town cold bricks with too fast swallow and metal money jingle birds flyin' benz pie jewelry round openin' the handfull of enjoy lettin' the itch of the witch (cause i can't say the other) strut her sins down the blvd spinnin' for the neck skin pretties in their spray on and pump ups makin' them get their wiggle's out for a scanty parkin of bottom at the take me past my ex's house slow and loud to show him nasty is the name of my new perfume and I don't wear much else either when dancin the eyes of the pale dogs _______________ daark scribblenote: not rap, more country, c-rap I guess? place off state street where the money skins play, and the hard riders make music that causes some urges to make wind gypsies out of sinderllas..etc |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I did enjoy this.... but I don't know what money skins are?? perhaps I'm having a blonde moment?? Be well Roniece |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sounds harsh, but falls softly on the ears. Good flow with this. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, the tinkle of tinsel-town... nothing else quite like it. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms bruce, money skins are some of the more affluent ladies that spend some change on decorations at several depths..hard riders are the long term scooter associates..million mile ink and contagious investments..thanks for the eyes ms _________________ ms Kethry, just bike night at gawdyville, a bit rowdy at times, thanks ms _____________ ms sun, thank you for drivin' by and wavin' |
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amberhues Member
since 2006-11-01
Posts 93 |
Take me past my ex's house and show him sinderella.... Sintown at its best, Stranger. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms hues, am waiting at the curb, thanks for the eyes ms |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger darlin' I think that's the name of the perfume I bought this morning nasty naughty something like that... smells good so does this poem |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, thank you for the scent that lingers and the eyes here |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sin town in tinsel time Stranger and a ride on the black witch sounds like a fine time..... got some wine to go with that good time ?? [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-22-2006 06:00 PM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, sounds like you have the right idea thanks |
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