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Dark Stranger
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West Coast

0 posted 2006-11-22 07:17 AM



the bound sounds of down town
cold bricks with too fast swallow
and metal money jingle birds
flyin' benz pie jewelry round

openin' the handfull of enjoy
lettin' the itch of the witch
(cause i can't say the other)
strut her sins down the blvd

spinnin' for the neck skin pretties
in their spray on and pump ups
makin' them get their wiggle's out
for a scanty parkin of bottom

at the take me past my ex's house
slow and loud to show him nasty
is the name of my new perfume
and I don't wear much else either

when dancin the eyes of the pale dogs
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daark

scribblenote: not rap, more country, c-rap I guess? place off state street where the money skins play, and the hard riders make music that causes some urges to make wind gypsies out of sinderllas..etc

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2006-11-22 07:22 AM


I did enjoy this.... but I don't know what money skins are??  perhaps I'm having a blonde moment??

Be well
Roniece

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2006-11-22 07:24 AM


Sounds harsh, but falls softly on the ears. Good flow with this.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2006-11-22 07:27 AM



Ah, the tinkle of tinsel-town...
nothing else quite like it.




Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2006-11-22 07:44 AM


ms bruce, money skins are some of the more affluent ladies that spend some change on decorations at several depths..hard riders are the long term scooter associates..million mile ink and contagious investments..thanks for the eyes ms

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ms Kethry, just bike night at gawdyville, a bit rowdy at times, thanks ms


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ms sun, thank you for drivin' by and wavin'


amberhues
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5 posted 2006-11-22 08:19 AM


Take me past my ex's house and show him sinderella....   Sintown at its best, Stranger.
Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2006-11-22 09:10 AM


ms hues, am waiting at the curb, thanks for the eyes ms
The Lady
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7 posted 2006-11-22 03:24 PM



Stranger darlin'
I think that's the name
of the perfume I bought
this morning

nasty
naughty
something like that...
smells good

so does this poem

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
8 posted 2006-11-22 03:32 PM


ladyone, thank you for the scent that lingers and the eyes here
Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2006-11-22 04:49 PM


sin town in tinsel time Stranger
and a ride on the black witch
sounds like a fine time.....

got some wine to go with that good time   ??

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-22-2006 06:00 PM).]

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2006-11-22 04:53 PM


ms gs, sounds like you have the right idea
thanks

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