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CharmedOne615 Junior Member
since 2006-11-22
Posts 12 |
I remember that day When I left for that place I was so sure that was a better place Because I just wanted to get away Everyone falls down sometimes Some more than others Its ok, get up Flowers are surely awaiting us when we make it. I got to that place and I lost most focus I lost all insight on reality and did not realize the Consequences of my actions I fell, but now im up Fearful that "she" would not forgive me I fell farther off the golden road into the darkness Consciously smiling, unconsciously dying I quickly tired out, but "she" forgave me Every now and again we will fall Some more than others Look towards the light! Flowers are surely awaiting us on the other side Now im at a new level And finally closer to that place! I know that "she will always be there to comfort Me, no matter how many times I fall And there will be plenty more to come. I look foward to them What dosent kill me will only make me stronger right? Dont give up Flowers are surely awaiting us In a place we have yet to see. By: Darius Boglin |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Welcome to Passions - I enjoyed your write and look forward to reading more of you  Be well Roniece |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Darius~ Welcome to the wonderful circle of poetic friendships~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome to the blue pages You will like it here! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Every now and again we will fall Some more than others Look towards the light! Flowers are surely awaiting us on the other side Siyo CharmedOne Very wise words,a good lesson here!
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! Most excellent entrance piece. Enjoy yourself here..I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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CharmedOne615 Junior Member
since 2006-11-22
Posts 12 |
Thankyou you all for that warm welcome! :-) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, and now I find the first piece. Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Welcome to Passions! I will enjoy reading you! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
This is interesting, it seems you have strung together pearls of wisdom to create this poem. Regards Kethry a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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