Open Poetry #39 |
Highway To Freedom |
MsSouthernOrchid Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 192 |
Highway To Freedom ______ Traveling down this highway, in the middle of the night, tears keep falling down my cheeks, yet I know that leaving's right. I can't keep pretending you love me when I know, that deep inside your heart you'll be glad to see me go. So, I'll keep my eyes on the road ahead, I won't worry where I've been. I can't keep looking back cause it'll bring me down again. I can't change the past, so i'll leave it blowin' in the wind. I'll find a better life and learn to live again. This old road will take me anywhere I want to go, I don't have to stay with a love that hurts me so. I was bent on leaving so I packed my bags to go, I just have to be strong now and not let my feelings show. I'll keep my eyes on this road ahead and not worry where I've been. I won't keep looking back to let you break my heart again. |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
This old road will take me anywhere I want to go, I don't have to stay with a love that hurts me so. Siyo MsSouthernOrchid,these are very wise words to live by,remember the good things,keep the lessons learn on the path and move ahead to better days!
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MsSouthernOrchid Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 192 |
Thanks Granny. I appreciate the words. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep deeply felt and understood |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I can't keep pretending you love me when I know, that deep inside your heart you'll be glad to see me go" a real heartbreaker yet I see strength in it |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
This one gave me chills.....and love hurts but remember it also hurts back times 2...take care.... kingsangel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writiing...the happiness of escaping from suffering...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
you are a strong woman - be confident in your next journey.... this was a very good write.. Be well Roniece |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Superb 'write' in plain language. MUCH applause! Poignant and important. |
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MsSouthernOrchid Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 192 |
Thank you everyone. I was not sure about this one, so I am glad you all enjoyed it. |
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