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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2006-11-21 12:56 PM

Inter-Winds

When the sky speaks to the water
Making waves her gentle swells
Summoning the first filled droplets
Churned in verse romantic spells
Left in whispers softly breathing
Overture of mystery
As she arches to bend nearer
Listening attentively

All the earth falls silent seeming
To allow this love take place
Moments pause so deeply dreaming
As she dances in his grace
When the sky speaks to the water
Telling secrets hidden long
Her response in aqua mirror
Moves her heart within his song

Copyright Kkh 11/21/06

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2006-11-21 01:30 PM

Beautiful

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2006-11-21 07:29 PM

Grand imagery as usual!:

“Moments pause so deeply dreaming
As she dances in his grace”

“Her response in aqua mirror
Moves her heart within his song”

absolutely lovely!!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2006-11-21 07:42 PM

Kathleen this is simply gorgeous. I do believe this to be my new favorite of yours!

wredgranny
Member

since 2006-11-18

Posts 493
Ky. USA

4 posted 2006-11-21 10:01 PM

Her response in aqua mirror
Moves her heart within his song

Howa! How very beautiful!

granny!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2006-11-22 12:33 PM

gosh girl! I love it when you rhyme!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2006-11-22 08:43 AM

TD, this is so beautiful, one of my favorites from your quill. It parallels my heartsong!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

7 posted 2006-11-22 02:35 PM

"All the earth falls silent seeming
To allow this love take place"

exquisite TD

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2006-11-23 11:43 AM

good read

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

9 posted 2006-12-01 02:50 PM

"When the sky speaks to the water
Telling secrets hidden long
Her response in aqua mirror
Moves her heart within his song"

Love this verse!!
Wonderful write TD.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

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