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Autumnal Mist
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Autumnal Mist |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Autumnal Mist a soft, gentle fog dresses the morning in a coastal luster no matter the distance inland the sweetness of it places my heart on the shores of ebb and flow a rhythm soothing to my soul, caressing pressing the wrinkles wrought by time– creating a type of newness not experienced for ages hence. what is this solace? how does it create such peace, a peace that wells up tears of thankfulness that I could share its fullness with you would clothe me in joy tenfold ©November 21, 2006 Virginia Salter Whether on the shoal or on the shore, I'll seek the lighthouse evermore. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
such a beautiful picture you've painted here Virginia  I'm in awe A poem begins with a lump in the throat. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
It's so good to read you again, Virginia Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
There is an ease about your write that I find much comfort in. Thank you for sharing! Omnia vincit amor |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VAS~ Haven't seen you here for eons ... welcome back~ **Only because you seek critique** would I mention the spelling/typo of "fulness"** I adore autumn verses~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks for all the wonderfully encouraging words and thanks, Marge, for catching the typo. And I thought I used spell check ...must have been on another item I was writing today. Appreciate the "good" eyes! VAS Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
VAS, I haven't seen your name for ages as you wouldn't have seen mine. Isn't it amazing how we breathe and grow as poets no matter where we are. I like this autumnal vers it has a lovely soft feel to it. BTW Yes I'm the same Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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