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. . . quintessence of love . . . . . . Tanka string |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
dry your tears dear one let your thoughts drift aimlessly remember good things breathe in the essence of love filling your wonderful heart ~*~ pray instead of wish for faith is trust perfected immutable hope incontrovertible love absolutely lives in you Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
this pair is a soothing balm, a wonderful way to start the day. The vocabulary in it is stunning, captivating, delicious. I really can't say any way I'd change it. VAS Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautiful 'Loper...and so soothing. Yup...you & this...keepers!  Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...saved faster than you can say "Love", Doctor!  A love-ly write! Only a poet who truly understands the meaning of love, could have written this! To Love & Loving, EA  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So much is healed in the love of the self...and in the love of others. You captured the peacefulness and gentleness of these thoughts very well. Enjoyed the moments here. TD |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
String along with me a soothing song of pure love Lilt of melody humming hearts in perfect share for all of the world hears ... sings~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Perfect !! hugs, Chris  Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Perfect view of How Jesus loves us! J. M. Barrie, the playwright, may have said it best when he wrote, “God gave us memories so that we might have roses in December.” |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
beautiful 'loper |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
loper... "faith is trust perfected" If only it were easier to trust. |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
dry your tears dear one let your thoughts drift aimlessly remember good things breathe in the essence of love filling your wonderful heart ~*~ pray instead of wish for faith is trust perfected immutable hope incontrovertible love absolutely lives in you Sigi for this sharing Interloper this is something that I am not so good at,but love to read the soft beauty of true loving trust!
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Today I needed some small quiet interlude that spoke of such things like peace, come grace, come loving today I needed just this |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
A poem begins with a lump in the throat. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
This lovely gift, as well as all given by you, surely calms a heart... well done, Poet. |
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twinkyfl1 Member
since 2006-12-15
Posts 133florida |
pray instead of wish for faith is trust perfected immutable hope incontrovertible love absolutely lives in you No one with open eyes and heart could refute the wisdom that lies at the heart of this wonderfully written piece. I personally have choosen this love above all others, as it will never let me down. This certainty gives me the peace and strength I need to get by each and every day of my life, which would quickly spin out of control without it. Thank you. To thy own self be true |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Your words are a prayer that heals the soul...beautiful words that touch all who read them and heal where you didn't know there was pain...Well done, interloper...making one touch God through tender words is a wonderful gift...good to read you again, my friend...may all the blessings of life and love be yours....I feel like I am meeting with old friends every time I return...wonderful...**BIG HUGS** |
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