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Open Poetry #39

Winter Chills (Senryu)

JLHunter
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0 posted 2006-11-20 07:02 AM

Winter Chills

Winter assails me.
Blustery winds break my heart
As our love grows cold.

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

[This message has been edited by JLHunter (11-20-2006 10:10 AM).]

passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-11-20 07:14 AM

and sometimes it's the wind that hurts more

JLHunter
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since 2006-10-08

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2 posted 2006-11-20 08:48 AM

Hi, Shadows.

It ALL hurts! I want pain-free love, but it's a poet's dream, I'm afraid.

Thanks for writing.

John

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

3 posted 2006-11-20 09:37 AM

This is a good American Senryu.

JLHunter
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since 2006-10-08

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4 posted 2006-11-20 10:11 AM

Right you are, Interloper. I did it again! Oh, well. Everyone is entitled to many, many mistakes. Or is that just me?

John

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

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