Open Poetry #39 |
at the temple of artemis |
The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
in bed last night artemis spoke to me of amazons I said I do not wish to speak of amazons nor goddesses I am weary give me peace she wrestled me this woman of the hunt captured me with her legs and then she spake and would these amazons take refuge in the house of artemis and would these full breasted women but sit and wait till danger passed I tell you now these women of heart of strength never waited never took refuge not from danger or love not from life or death nor even from themselves these women set their eyes upon the roads upon the sun glanced upon marvels swung their chaste legs mounted clouds and rode give me peace I cried yet leave your legs awhile _________________ the temple of artemis was said to be a place of refuge for the amazons when some of zeus’ more rascally sons gave them agita artemis tells it differently |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I tell you now these women of heart of strength never waited never took refuge not from danger or love not from life or death nor even from themselves these women set their eyes upon the roads upon the sun glanced upon marvels swung their chaste legs mounted clouds and rode ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Good Lord Kate, you HAVE been reading my thoughts this day, and writing them. Think I will just lay this pen down now and let it rest awhile... geez...and You? It WAS most definately worth the wait. seek the flame within yourself |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
gentle Donna do NOT put your pen down write what moves you I think we have been riding side by side this day upon clouds perhaps hugs sweet lady |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Perhaps, the chariots of the Gods have picked us up, wisped us into the heavens and allowed us rest upon the clouds of Mount Olympus so that we might this day look down upon the valleys and with contentment, smile, with sigh. (excuse me for intruding Kate, your inspiring me today!!) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
With legs that reach the heavens, piercing the snow of clouds........alluring, suculent, ...sheesh....... |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
"these women set their eyes upon the roads upon the sun glanced upon marvels swung their chaste legs mounted clouds and rode" Nicely done my Lady! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
all I can say is wow |
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amberhues Member
since 2006-11-01
Posts 93 |
I'm with P.S.! WOW is correct!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
gentle Donna wherever we are it has been a pleasure smile you’re not intruding you have been an inspiration for me too sorry ‘bout that wait sheesh is what I said too Barry thank you thank you Pressie almost as nice as riding a harley thank you kindly Dixie thank you amberhues |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, can ya send me the address of this place or better yet show me?..they must need a handy man around to fix those little things here and there..(grin) ladyone, you do weave magic with your pen |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger darlin’ we can go together meet me very late tonight bring two hot pastrami sandwiches two bottles of dr brown’s cream soda we will read about the temple of artemis wait there is one thing I forgot to mention tell you when you get here thank you |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear Lady...I love it..."leave me your legs", indeed!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you dear Martie |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I do love this piece ... Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
and would these amazons take refuge in the house of artemis and would these full breasted women but sit and wait till danger passed Howa! And a war cry! I think they might not wait but chase the danger into the sunset eh? I like this very much Lady it stirs the blood to battle,and you sleepy still?lol!
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
‘loper thank you very much nope granny wide awake now thanks for the war cry lol |
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