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Dark Streets Of Happiness And Relativity
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Dark Streets Of Happiness And Relativity |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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. Tie the rope gently and don't beat her down, but don't be afraid of the rain. Fancy and chancy her pleasure thread's thin, so never be shy with the pain. She was mine to toy with long before you, I know all the doors to her dreams. Tears are a big part of her fantasy ride, just like her struggles and screams. Don't try to use logic, don't try to be kind, she's never been looking for friends. You just have a chance for an interesting ride, and you'll know when the carnival ends. So, tie the rope gently and don't beat her down, but don't be afraid of the rain. Fancy and chancy her pleasure thread's thin, so never be shy with the pain. ©2006 by icebox . |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
so so true, and written so well... enjoyed this....Bravo!!!! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Much truth...but don't bite off more than one might be able to chew. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox "Tie the rope gently and don't beat her down, but don't be afraid of the rain" An amazing poem!  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh this is breathtaking keeps calling me back |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Wow.....so deep unable to see the oceans floor hear I like it.....but who is she...surely if she is this important someone has hidden her good....thanks I like it alot. Julie kingsangel |
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