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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA 
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I painted the moon blue turned the stars down a watt or two walked another 1000 miles in my mind time to fast forward no more time to rewind looking back gets easier when I figure out another riddle don't want to be left here stuck in the middle surrounded by the angels in the eye of the storm keeping all your demons safe cosy and warm yes, I think it's time to move on...... kingsangel [This message has been edited by Angel4aKing (11-17-2006 05:56 PM).] |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
nicely written, i enjoyed this Time brings change and change comes with time |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Thanks I keep changing the name to this one....I can't make up my mind..... kingsangel |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Julie~ I simply ADORE THIS THOUGHT - turned the stars down a watt or two' Precious is as precious does~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
I'm with Marge, Loved this part: "turned the stars down a watt or two" Omnia vincit amor |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write...much enjoyed! Hugs~Nancy Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
now this is cool |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
great placement of words.loved it. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I too liked the way you wrote this, a cute write. |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
A great job on this. Good encouraging thoughts. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
time to fast forward no more time to rewind looking back gets easier when I figure out another riddle don't want to be left here stuck in the middle Wisdom wrapped in fantasy,a beautiful thing to see. This say much about the woman you are the strength within,as looking back becomes easier as you are moving forward then regrets are few,a good way of thinking!
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
enjoyed this one |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Thanx to you all... kingsangel |
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