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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2006-11-16 08:07 PM


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It’s this playful
Give and take between us
I like most

Two comfortable veterans
Through all that has gone before
We make a world of our own
With a few words in tune

A small duet
Softly intimate
Content to be free of harm

What would I do
With however slender yet another girl
Who didn’t know how to sing


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© Copyright 2006 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2006-11-21 03:13 AM


Enjoyed...James
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2006-11-21 06:13 AM


Sweet thoughts, John~~

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Drauntz
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Los Angeles California
3 posted 2007-04-25 12:54 PM


anything.
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