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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2006-11-16 02:52 PM


Dreams
like smoke,
begin with fire,
sparked imagination
bellowed alive.
Until, unrealised
they ascend,
spark doused by
swirling draughts.

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2006-11-17 07:43 AM


What a vision!

Excellent.

Love,
Margherita

LeeJ
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2 posted 2006-11-17 08:36 AM


yes indeedy, a great vision with outstanding visuals....
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2006-11-17 09:12 AM


May your dreams continue to rise, Dear Poet, and and may they never be doused by swirling draughts!

Every poem that you post is a gift for your fellow pipsters!

Lovin' hug,
Linda


passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2006-11-17 10:31 AM


this touches me as a bit sad

good to read you Phil

The Lady
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The Southwest
5 posted 2006-11-17 01:52 PM



dream deferred
or dream lost?
a beautiful
thought provoking write
Goldenrose

lightkeeper
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pluto
6 posted 2006-11-18 03:42 AM




xxx Phil xxx

    Realisation starts from a tiny spark... when we live our dreams,we are surely living with pure intent to ascend. Like swirling draughts, we rise as one.

       Beautifully Sparked As Always

        Love Bea xxxx

    

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
7 posted 2006-11-20 01:33 PM


Dream on, Dream on, until those dreams come true,.....

Smoke burns your eyes, stings like love,
somethings are hidden behind a smokescreen,
it takes the burning to wash our eyes out and see clearly what is before us.

J. M. Barrie, the playwright, may have said it best when he wrote, “God gave us memories so that we might have roses in December.”

Goldenrose
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8 posted 2006-11-20 02:28 PM


Dreams are so good when lived in reality, i thank and am blessed by those that bring tangible joy and tactile tenderness to my life.

Thank you to all who replied here, my glowing love goes especially to Bea, with heartfelt warmth and tender touches darling...xxx

Goldenrose.

At the touch of love, everyone becomes poets. Plato 427 BC-348.

lightkeeper
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pluto
9 posted 2006-11-20 02:46 PM




Goldenrose.

  Darling,
              i am so blessed to be a part of your life..in the waking moments and those of your dreams darling, Phil pinch me again so i know your real hahahah xxxx...
     Oh and dont forget to bring your map at the weekend darling... otherwise we will have to find our way using the stars hahahah xxxxxx
                Love
                     Bea xxxxx

wredgranny
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10 posted 2006-11-20 06:36 PM


Dreams
like smoke,
begin with fire,
sparked imagination
bellowed alive.
Until, unrealised
they ascend,
spark doused by
swirling draughts.


Siyo GoldenRose
Your words speak deep truth,without our dreams where are the colors of our lives?


  granny!

Midnitesun
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Gaia
11 posted 2006-11-22 11:21 AM


~the smile of love~
becomes you.
What a lovely write.
For both of you, a huge smile!
PS..when fire and water mix?
watch for the steam and hold on
to the sizzle!

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