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Distortia
New Member

since 2006-11-16

Posts 5

0 posted 2006-11-16 11:05 AM

Precious vessel
Speak through the gleam in your eye
Still and permanent
I wonder what it feels like
Curve my hand to cup your cheek
Tear ducts empty via the circumstance
Yet I remain by your side, draped in your favorite colors
Relinquishing the life I'd planned, the life you left behind
Singing to the tune of a new day
One where we can be again
I've put out of place any remnant of fear
He's arrived
I'm awake, it's been this way for days
I simply ask for you not to succumb
Clench your teeth and battle the burden
Fingers intertwined, mines fair and yours frail
Blaring noise rings throughout the room
Dissolution has arrived
Never turning away from the scene
I watch as you are set free
Now I may rest a little, as I listen to the sound of your wings

Perceptions of reality are bending as truth seeps into the masses.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2006-11-16 11:13 AM

Welocme to the Blue pages

You will like it here.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2006-11-16 07:30 PM

This reminds me of the [near] ending
of Steel Magnolias...

and in watching that movie, which moved
me to tears, I read this,
and am moved to tears.

Welcome to Passions. I do hope you wrote this
not from your own experience, but
imagination, alone.

Please, check your email
for a Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2006-11-16 09:15 PM

Distortia....Lovely, emotive writing. Welcome to Passions!!

sandgrain
Member Elite

since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

4 posted 2006-11-16 09:48 PM

Welcome. I enjoyed your offering.

Rae

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2006-11-17 09:47 AM

Leale~
Welcome to the ever-growing circle of poetic friendships~

This is poignantly penned~
And ... beautifully so~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2006-11-17 10:13 AM

My goodness gracious! What an incredible debuting poem! I could almost hear the fluttering of her wings.

~ 'Tis so sad, yet very inspirational.

Giving you a warm, welcoming hug,
Earth Angel

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

7 posted 2006-11-17 01:49 PM

yes
it truly is a lovely poem Leale

welcome!

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