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The Sound Of Her Wings
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The Sound Of Her Wings |
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Distortia New Member
since 2006-11-16
Posts 5 |
Precious vessel Speak through the gleam in your eye Still and permanent I wonder what it feels like Curve my hand to cup your cheek Tear ducts empty via the circumstance Yet I remain by your side, draped in your favorite colors Relinquishing the life I'd planned, the life you left behind Singing to the tune of a new day One where we can be again I've put out of place any remnant of fear He's arrived I'm awake, it's been this way for days I simply ask for you not to succumb Clench your teeth and battle the burden Fingers intertwined, mines fair and yours frail Blaring noise rings throughout the room Dissolution has arrived Never turning away from the scene I watch as you are set free Now I may rest a little, as I listen to the sound of your wings Perceptions of reality are bending as truth seeps into the masses. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welocme to the Blue pages  You will like it here. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This reminds me of the [near] ending of Steel Magnolias... and in watching that movie, which moved me to tears, I read this, and am moved to tears. Welcome to Passions. I do hope you wrote this not from your own experience, but imagination, alone. Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Distortia....Lovely, emotive writing. Welcome to Passions!! |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Welcome. I enjoyed your offering. Rae |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Leale~ Welcome to the ever-growing circle of poetic friendships~ This is poignantly penned~ And ... beautifully so~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My goodness gracious! What an incredible debuting poem! I could almost hear the fluttering of her wings. ~ 'Tis so sad, yet very inspirational. Giving you a warm, welcoming hug, Earth Angel |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
yes it truly is a lovely poem Leale welcome! |
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