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Enchantress
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0 posted 2006-11-14 11:46 AM


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Wave your magic mind
Perform your hocus pocus
I'm under your spell
Hold me in sweet surrender
Kiss me as my heart applauds.

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© Copyright 2006 Nancy Lee - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2006-11-14 12:22 PM


Nancy,
That would be my pleasure.

SmartChick
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2 posted 2006-11-14 12:30 PM


I just love to read your tankas. You do them so well.
Margherita
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3 posted 2006-11-14 12:52 PM


... and Margherita applauds you for this little jewel, dear Nancy! Very intense!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Smiles for Seymour's reply ...

Martie
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4 posted 2006-11-14 01:07 PM


Nancy..it is you that is magic!  
Interloper
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5 posted 2006-11-14 01:11 PM


Simply 1derful

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

secondhanddreampoet
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6 posted 2006-11-14 01:33 PM


Wow!...for me, another entire ‘poem’ in even
just this one 'most fine' line!: “Wave your magic mind”! [in this poem, 'Enchantress' was doin' said 'mind waving'!!]....

In my opinion, this ‘write’ was excellent!
[Ms. 'Enchantress' holds me 'Spellbound'!]
...'Tank-(y)a' very much!

-- one poet of 'second-hand' dreams

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7 posted 2006-11-14 02:31 PM


Oooh, I love this one!
I told ya tanka's are fun !!
plus, it's about the only form that I can write lately
Hugs & Miss Ya!!

skyshine
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8 posted 2006-11-14 02:39 PM


How do you define love in the many ways you have done so, Nancy, and have them all make so much sense in so many different ways? Seems you have a magic mind yourself.

sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

Enchantress
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9 posted 2006-11-14 04:04 PM


Sy~I do believe the pleasure would be all mine!

Hi Sue~ Seems to be lately that I'm hooked on Tankas!  Thanks and hugs.

Margherita~ I always appreciate your comments.  Thank you hugs.

Martie~Me..magic? Ya think?  
Love ya lady.

Interloper~Please take your boot out of the dust and give me a ..hug.     Thank you.

Enchantress
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10 posted 2006-11-14 04:09 PM


Bruce~I am humbled by your "Excellent"! It is my pleasure to have you sign my Tanka.

Chris~Hi!!  Seems I have been addicted to these things lately.  
Wish my muse would wake up!  
Love and miss ya!

Sky~And I thank you for your magical replies to my posts!  

scorpio
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11 posted 2006-11-14 07:46 PM


Your magic resonates in this write Tinker.  You weave a spell of words and passion.  Wonderfully done!!  I'm under your spell.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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12 posted 2006-11-14 08:39 PM


Scorpio~You are a dear!
Be careful what you say or do..
I just might cast a spell on you!
Thank you so much.

The Lady
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13 posted 2006-11-14 11:20 PM



oh Nancy!
that's a dream of a poem!

scorpio
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14 posted 2006-11-15 08:42 AM


Magically...again.

believe in what your heart feels...

HopeS
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15 posted 2006-11-15 08:56 AM


Applauding you Nancy , this was magical indeed

Hope

Enchantress
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16 posted 2006-11-15 10:26 AM


Lady~Oh that we could dream these dreams more often. Thank you.  

Scorpio~Looks like you worked a little magic of your own.  Thank you.  

Hope~I watch you weave your magic as well on these blue pages.  Thank you.

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17 posted 2006-11-16 09:31 AM


EnchantedLady~

GORGEOUS !!!!!!!!

Do you hear it ??

Listen ... now do you hear it ?

Yep ... all the way from Florida,
right on up to Canada ...








... and you thought it was thunder !

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -         noles1@totcon.com     

Enchantress
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18 posted 2006-11-16 11:24 AM


~Ah Marge!  My dearest friend.
And I can see your smile!
Thank you so much..for your friendship and your encouragement.

LeeJ
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19 posted 2006-11-16 11:44 AM


and you leave me spell bound
wonderful thoughts

Enchantress
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20 posted 2006-11-16 01:06 PM


Lee!~It's SO good to see you!
You have been missed!!!

SoundWaves
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21 posted 2006-11-16 08:20 PM


WOW! creative write!!!!


Enchantress
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22 posted 2006-11-16 08:25 PM


Hey Chris!!  How ya doin'?
Bout time for an encore in UTube eh?
Love ya!

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23 posted 2006-11-17 01:12 PM


well now i just stopped in to read a few, glad i read this one

Time brings change and change comes with time

Enchantress
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24 posted 2006-11-17 01:22 PM


Hi Kyle~Thank you so much for stopping by, reading, and taking the time to reply.
It is so much appreciated.

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~
                                    

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25 posted 2006-11-18 01:31 AM


A wonderful Tanka, Nancy Lee!!
I love all these different forms you're doing, Lady.
Good job!!
Love ya,
Ethel

Enchantress
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26 posted 2006-11-18 07:57 AM


Ethel Mae~You are SO missed around here!
Thank you for stopping in and come back more often!  

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27 posted 2006-11-21 05:26 PM


all puckered up here...loved it Nancy - Paul
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