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Open Poetry #39

The End?

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

0 posted 2006-11-14 06:32 AM

Another heart beat passes
The world sits silent
waiting for what is to come

So what do you need now
That this world is coming to an end
Have you thought about it
has your mind and heart connected
because you are out of time
no-one gets a second shot at a last breath
make it count.

So won't you sing me a rainbow Josie roll me a song
Just tonight make it right 'cause it's been wrong for oh so long
There's lots of shades of darkn

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2006-11-14 06:35 AM

no-one gets a second shot at a last breath
make it count

I like this! I hope your world doesn't end too soon!

Be well
Roniece

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

2 posted 2006-11-14 08:31 PM

I love the part about heart and mind connecting.....this brought light to my eyes.
thank you for sharing. Julie

kingsangel

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

3 posted 2006-11-14 10:45 PM

Preachy, yet to the point.

John

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