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Dirt Clods and the Moon in Day
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Dirt Clods and the Moon in Day |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Dirt Clods and the Moon in Day A minute ago or was it a day sky cut in half the moon to say "see me sun within your time nothing is lost even in rhyme" And all the while I thought the sky was a secret I just caught with some midnight magic draught just to take my thoughts away from the dirt my path holds anyway I watched that lazy thumb print pale even exclaimed a “look see” to him who nonchalantly took my grin only to return to dig and plant his own song for spring’s transplant And so my Sunday walked through time and built steeples of another kind each to each his own blessing strong in some sort of moon-earth sing along |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ Landry and I saw that leftover moon hanging in our daysky too~ You wrote it ... and I LOVE IT ! Thank you for 'seeing'~ My hello's to your gardener too~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge and Landry Leigh~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"moon-earth sing along" ~ and a lovely one at that!  Love & Moon Light, Linda |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
How you do write  Write on and I will raptly read! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"And all the while I thought the sky was a secret I just caught" you got a way about you Martie and I love reading it |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 I'm completely in awe! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
"see me sun within your time nothing is lost even in rhyme" a mantra... something to hold tight in heart. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"And so my Sunday walked through time and built steeples of another kind each to each his own blessing strong in some sort of moon-earth sing along" So very beautiful Martie.. You know how much I enjoy your words. Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And so my Sunday walked through time and built steeples of another kind ~*~ Sissie... I know the walk. But you talk the poem. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Excellent!: "And so my Sunday walked through time and built steeples of another kind each to each his own blessing strong in some sort of moon-earth sing along" wonderful 'write' from a grand lady! [...and, I've been waitin' a long time for someone to write a poem 'bout: the Moon in Day....could never quite 'do it' myself! |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
you are so good - loved experiencing a Sunday with you!! Paul |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Thank you, Paul....this one is far too good to have missed. Speaking of which, so are you, Martie; I'm proud to know you....and words like these say why. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
And so my Sunday walked through time and built steeples of another kind each to each his own blessing strong in some sort of moon-earth sing along Siyo Martie a beautiful thing is it not the song between Mother Earth and Brother Moon,their dance through space/time the guiding hand of woman kind!
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