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your call |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA 
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My words decieving as they were carried over the distance from me to you have hurt you I know it's true a love untouched yet clenched deep within your soul somehow always believing I need you to be whole a burning desire unquenched yet savored in the passion of your heat a love ungiven always hidden yet clenched in your fist happiness was my only wish and now I begin to rebuild my wall my heart, my love, your call.... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
you express a painful time in this write. I'm not sure I can say I liked it but it had an impact on me. Cheers Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Thank you and I agree I don't think I liked it either.....I am experiencing a poets block...Thanks for the crtique!!!  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Don't worry or fear...time will pass...and suddenly...a fountain shall pour forth... |
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