Open Poetry #39 |
Creation |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Creation Creation is an art a point Illusion of a minds anoint A wisp of air a moment’s dare A pixel of the way you care Aphasia of common sense A light that stirs no recompense A phantom of a spirits course A giving and the soul its source It is a statement made by you As beautiful as mornings dew An act that plays upon times stage An addendum an added page It is a force of semi fire Clear of see with little mire Stirring up a breeze of core Opening up a spirits door A place I often go in seem It’s often in my wish and dream |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T.! I truly do believe that when we create, we are aligning ourselves with Our Creator. He surely must be smiling at you! Love & God's Creative Light, EA |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Oh, master poet, We drink of your creative juices Keep quenching our thirst Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel You are my earth angel. Elizabeth, I think I'm all juiced out. LOL |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Sy..I'll say it again, it is such a joy to awaken in the morn and read your words of wisdom. Take care and have a good weekend. Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, I look for your comments every day. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
and I shall say it again Sir Sy it's a joy to spend the evening with your words |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
catching your words this morning...thanks Sy M |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Such a true write. All the poems I have read of yours are clear and very beautiful. You didn't disapoint. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady I can only thank you dear Lady. nakdthoughts You welcome dear. rhia_5779 A beautiful reply thank you. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
what a 'Creation'!: “ Aphasia of common sense A light that stirs no recompense A phantom of a spirits course A giving and the soul its source ” I could likely read one of Seymour’s poems a thousand times and always find somethin’ ‘fresh and beautiful’ to think about!.... Grand and gracious ‘food’ for the mind, heart and spirit! [at the banquet of ‘private interpretation’] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
secondhanddreampoet Simpatico, you are a man after my own heart. Thank you. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Mr. Seymour Sir, I love your creation. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick I love you loving my creation. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I wish these were my words ..."at the banquet of ‘private interpretation’" since I so heartily agree with them my friend! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper They are yours for the asking. |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
beautifully woven flow....... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
marcel Thank you so much. |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
I find myself reading your poems 2 or 3 times. Just like a good book...so sad to see it end. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
TinaTrivett Excellent reply, thank you. |
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