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Wounded Rose |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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ALL (to me)! [when life grows sadder... Love grows stronger] (for Ms. C. Rose) I am but a ‘stranger’ to the ways of other men!..... Dear lady...fine lady...fair rose, how could they be so cruel?!..... For: You are ALL the promise... in a springtime breeze. You are ALL the magic... in a summer sunrise. You are ALL the grandeur... in a autumn sunset. You are All the wonder... in a winter forest..... And: I would rather die... than ever prove untrue! I can only stand in awe to marvel.... at ALL you made of me! You have done it ALL... by simply ‘being you’!.... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh my..... simply breathtaking! loved your words! Be well Roniece |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
you have a fine voice Bruce this caught my heart Kate |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
There is a place, where words like lightyears, travel. Warmed by the sun of yesterday, aglow by the moon of tomorrow. Never should they be disenchanted by harsh winds, but rather celebrated in the gathering of the fine times a life has lingered. Great voice. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
secondhanddreampoet Good write, enjoyed. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Tell me who admires and loves you and I'll tell you who you are." ~Antoine de Saint-Exupery Le Petit Prince |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Oh this is reminiscent of Auden's work. Very well done you have a strong and poignant voice. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a very passionate piece! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
how romantic!!! beautiful |
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