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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2006-11-11 12:14 PM



               Lonely Words

I.    Lonely words...
      are all I have
      beyond ‘goodbyes’...

II.   Words of prayer...
       that you might remember
       above past ‘mistakes’
       the cherished truth
       of Love’s new expression...

III.  Words of sadness...
       that one who cares so much
       can somehow change
       the course of love’s direction...

IV. Words of hope...
       that someday...somehow
       you will show me
       the humblest road
       into your heart...
       Beyond ‘goodbyes’
       all I have are...

V.  Lonely words!



© Copyright 2006 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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1 posted 2006-11-11 02:48 AM


Funny about those lonely words...soon as you say one...somebody hears ya.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2006-11-11 02:54 AM


oh I really liked this!

Be well
Roniece

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2006-11-11 08:50 AM


Very very nicely penned Bruce.
Enjoyed reading your thoughts.

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~
                                    

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2006-11-11 09:01 AM


Bruce,
Well done I enjoyed.

Drauntz
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5 posted 2007-05-17 07:21 PM


interesting! still good list.

enjoyed

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