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A Wordy Pantomime
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A Wordy Pantomime |
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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland 
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It is difficult for me to suggest what I most dearly want. I would like a lot of things, it is true Tuscan skies marred by dancing flame and the troubles of yesteryear left in the bottom of a bottle A Tango in the rain perhaps? I know a wonderful dancer he has feathers on his feet a fleet of feathers at his feet which he employs on any whim, with great delight and we dance until the sky's awash with dewy morning light. A billion grains of sand I'll make my own beach, and Wave, well he won't touch the shore He is too polite for that. I would like a meal of buttercup'd honey to tease and tease and tease entrance is forbidden But you may politely watch. I would like a great many things darling heart But what I want the most Is to be Left Alone |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that ending really grabbed me! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
pc, yep...highway, some jingle, and time..enjoyed this |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
the ending speaks my language too this is wonderful! I love your dancer with feathers on his feet... |
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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland |
passing shadows~ when I wrote it I thought the ending might've been kind of weak. Apparently not *grin*. thanks for reading ~cheye xx |
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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland |
Dark Stranger~ glad you enjoyed. thanks for the reply ~cheye xx |
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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland |
The Lady ~ you are too kind. Oh yes the language full of.... wist? is that a word? Hm. Thanks for the read ~cheye xx |
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