Open Poetry #39 |
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cantillation |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest ![]() |
"Rise up my love, my fair one, and come away."-Song of Solomon 2:10 I am the shulamite maiden though I hide in the clefts of rock night shall take delight in me pressing for the sweetness betwixt my breasts morning shall call me forth sun shall cry for my kiss rain weep for the goblet of my round navel my beloved shall find me by the smell of pomegranate of wheat and lilies there is a balm in gilead that calls to me cries fetch me ripe smell of deep fruit loroco buds linden leaves still dripping honey stored in clay it calls to me I shall stroke it on his thighs weep as the prophet wept caress it on his belly where I rest my head stain it on his neck his neck that thickens as the tower of david thus so shall I tell him this sweet balm cried for you and I ministered you are my white and ruddy beloved and I am your young bride shulamite maiden _______ cantillation - Jewish liturgical chant [This message has been edited by The Lady (11-10-2006 12:36 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What promise awaits the unfolding of this...scenting the air with joy! Wonderful work! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your words painted a Master's piece of art, Kate... it's beautiful. ![]() |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, I hear they have some relly cool wheels too..though only one horsepower...and real slinky jammies? (enjoyed you ms) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Kate, it is good to see your words again, very much to my delight. This is one of my favorite of yours, incredible imagery in this masterpiece. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady When you cantilate you surely cantilate. And that was a read worth reading. ![]() ![]() |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What depth, Kate. Beautiful! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you for your kind words TD thank you Karilea Song of Solomon is a favorite read for me so rich ![]() Stranger darlin’ they got some kewl rides and you would not believe those slinky jammies nawww... you probably would thank you Dixie thank you gentle Donna it is good to see you here read your sweet words thank you Sir Sy ![]() ![]() thank you ‘loper |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Breath-takingly wonderful. That's all I have to add to what has been said. No, I have to also say that I am in love with your poetry. There. NOW that's all I have to add. Yep. A |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kate lady....your poetry always feels so sensual....as if I could reach out and touch the soft fabric of your words. ![]() |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
just beautiful ! hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
aziza you always make me smile thank you my friend oh my thank you so much Martie ![]() thank you Chris hugs to you |
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