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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Soqwu Disgitisdi Gvdi One Who Weaves Dreams ~*Willow White Feather*~ In tongue of Ancient Cherokee Spirit's ink comes a voice to make us think It shares the legends of days gone by sometimes joy ... sometimes tear from eye~ Oh, to weave the perfected dream threaded thoughts without a seam From the woven past to dreams of the night another chance to get it right~ I would weave this dream for you all mankind holding hands, no matter their hue In the spinning of the loom of dreams I would weave a perfect seam~ ~*~ ~Inspire of new friendship ... or renewing of one from a time gone by~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful dear Marge~I love when you write this way. *Still have my little gold feather in keep.* Hugs & Love, Nancy No spring, nor summer beauty |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
This poem means so much to me on oh-so-many (almost 'infinitely nested) levels..... Marge has woven the truest tapestry of Camelot from all the ever-rare, 'bright and shining' moments of "Deep-Time's" cosmic dance...wherin any visionary ever 'dreamed' of the unity of humankind! Reading this...I was 'there once more' with Martin Luther King as he spoke of his 'dream'...and also, I couldn't help but think 'bout all the unconscionable "Trails of Tears" (individual and collective)throughout all of human history! What a grand 'spirit' and fine 'loom' this lady has! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
THis is jusr as lovely and meaningful as a poem can be, and I am sending it off to a friend . Margie, dear, you touched my heart today. Love you Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, There are too many languages to write about the perfect dream. It has to come from the perfect mind and that I have yet to achieve. LOL but I keep trying. |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Love it Marge |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Marge, The spirit of the people shines within you. A masterpiece here, of beautiful weave. TD |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 that tongue twister title drew me inside; the content and presentation held me inside the circle of One. Thank you, for the hold. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is beautiful Marge. hugging you, Chrislane Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: You are definitely a dream weaver! This is wonderful! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
spectacular!! |
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MAVBEAR Junior Member
since 2006-10-19
Posts 33Louisiana |
a lovely display of the human drive for perfection as he sees, even more so by one as talented as you ,, enjoyed this emmensely Mav |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Ever since I was a kid, whenever I would find a white feather, I would pick it up. I'd done this so much, that I have pretty sizable bouquet--and sometimes I decorate gifts with them, and sometimes I stick them in a note. I had no idea why I did this--I just really liked white feathers.  Your poem reminded me of this, and today I can add the poetic version. It also led me to a bit of thought, and being the Joseph Campbell geek that I am, it resonated a memory for me--and yep, here it is: "In Joseph Campbell's book, "The Inner Reaches of Outer Space - Metaphor as Myth and Religion, he shows an Egyptian scene of the weighing of the heart of the deceased against a feather symbolic of Ma'at, goddess of the moral order of the universe. Ma'at is the goddess of truth and represents truth and justice of the Supreme God. The weight of the heart of the deceased is found to be just only if guilt has not made the heart heavier than Ma'at's feather. The heart must be ma'ati (in accordance with Ma'at) if the deceased is to 'become Osiris' (i.e. take on immortality) If the heart does not pass the test, the soul must be reborn. " Thanks Marge, for the poem which prompted the thought. Much appreciated and I enjoyed the toke on the peace pipe.  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
spoken like a true Cherokee Marge |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you all for the kindness of your replies~ *Huglets*  ~*Willow White Feather*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
This belongs on top Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
We are so lucky to have the "Master Weaver" here on this site. Loved your words, may the perfect dream fill all our nights. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
You all are much too kind to this lady of humble word offerings~ But ... I thank you dearly~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Marge I loved this poem. I was out of comission again but as usual I am back. I think this is one of your better ones and I am so proud to know you. Hugs Kimberly |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I have a friend, who sends me feathers of kind and I send her feathers of sort... and we are of a kind, in sort, and she knows who she is, and I know, through her, who i am... and we know you. Kindred feathers of light. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ladies~ Thank you both~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
perfect, dear Marge! love |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Just a reminder to self to thread the loom once more~ *Huglets* ~*WillowOfTheFeatheredLight*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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