dreamin’ of ‘true love’

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Open Poetry #39

dreamin’ of ‘true love’

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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0 posted 2006-11-09 07:04 AM

             "Fairy Primrose"
             [for Ms. C. Rose]

[Genus/Species: Primula Malacoides:
    A remarkably tiny and truly
    beautiful lilac rose of China!]

When evening stirs the consciousness.....
in sinuous shadows' serenade
as glimmering sunbeams sadly sing
a last...lingering sunset’s song
'til melancholy memories.....dare arise
to cross across the star-tipped skies....
You sail the dream-shore sea......
As....love....becomes....no fantasy
and truth remains....epiphany!

passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-11-09 07:47 AM

awesome!

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

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2 posted 2006-11-09 08:21 AM

Evening, in its philanthropy of melancholy, seems the quietest of hours, lest dawn itself forget to venture out.
As the heart mulls over in half light, there comes the reminder of what is missing most, and the will to take that very vision and sculpt it to become what is needed now.
May all your best dreams...come true.

Martie

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3 posted 2006-11-09 11:28 AM

I love poetry using flowers...this was very lovely!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

4 posted 2006-11-09 04:57 PM

How I enjoy reading you..
especially when your melancholy memories arise.

Well done!

No spring, nor summer beauty
hath such grace...
As I have seen in one autumnal face.

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

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5 posted 2006-11-09 10:23 PM

oh
this is simply lovely

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27

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6 posted 2006-11-09 10:59 PM

This has to be the most beautiful poem I have ever read and I love to read poetry! So sweet I loved it! Kisses, KA

kingsangel

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