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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2006-11-08 05:29 PM



yearning
rapidly grows
as you spring to my mind
remembering everything
beginning with our first innocent kiss
leading to that intimate touch
and the softness of you
generates this
yearning

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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just out of reach
1 posted 2006-11-08 05:53 PM


Perfect !!
hugs, Chris

"Be yourself; everyone else is already taken." - Oscar Wilde

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2 posted 2006-11-08 06:14 PM


Moments pulse in wait
Each second, sweetest torture
Rewards trial worthwhile

Wonderful vision!

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2006-11-08 09:27 PM


mmmmmmm

delicious!

The Lady
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4 posted 2006-11-08 09:53 PM



sigh...


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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2006-11-09 09:08 AM


Chris ~
I do love hugs
Especially in shadows of the Nightshade.

Kathleen ~
What a sparkling reply...

Dixie ~
Aw shux, ma'am...

The Lady ~
I think I need some air

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Martie
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6 posted 2006-11-09 11:17 AM


I love this form....well done!!
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7 posted 2006-11-09 12:35 PM


AhLoper~
You Rictameter in perfect poetic step !

BEAUTIFUL, sir~



*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Gaia
8 posted 2006-11-09 12:39 PM


yes, you are dancing today
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Deep in the heart
9 posted 2006-11-09 01:40 PM


Martie ~
Thank you for the very kind words sweet lady

Marge ~
You are too kind.  But, then, you have always been  and I pray that you will always be that kind to me

Kacy ~
May I have the next dance.  I believe it is a waltz

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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a 'Universalist' !
10 posted 2006-11-09 01:53 PM


I'm most assuredly impressed!....
I've never 'dared' to write in
special 'formats'.... another
fine 'poetic voice' on this most
lovely website sets yet another
'distant horizon' for Me [for
this most humble "wordsmith's"
journey-quest] in poetry and
"Deep-Time"...........

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11 posted 2006-11-17 03:38 PM


remembering everything.... oh, yes... I know this yearning! *S*

Superb write, my friend! *S*

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