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Open Poetry #39

[this unmorning]

shirtless
Member

since 2006-04-29

Posts 359

0 posted 2006-11-08 04:58 PM

this unmorning
the sun
gave up

it had barely reached
the horizon
when it poured
itself
like lava
into puddles
of light

so fierce
in its failure
that children prayed
for night

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2006-11-14 04:37 AM

so fierce
in its failure
that children prayed
for night

oh I hope the sun never gives up Anthony!
Loved your write

Be well
Roniece

gypsyheartx
Member

since 2006-02-09

Posts 104
Istanbul-Turkey/U.S.-Maryland

2 posted 2006-11-14 04:41 PM

Wow, very breathtaking and powerful. You're poetry is so inspiring!!

Thanks for sharing,
Miranda

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

3 posted 2006-11-14 08:17 PM

Very cool I liked it and I think I will visit your web site....

kingsangel

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