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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2006-11-08 02:47 PM


What is haunted, when all
you have is alone and the wind
is blowing blankets through the
city to your doorstep, you are

dreaming that the water's gone

but it's always visible, closed
eyes see the signs, you're walking
with your feet strapped down by
mud, and twig-lined tennis shoes

and the man on the corner, he
seems to have perfected the blues
shaking hands for a dollar with
the lady from the evening
news channel that no one watches

anymore, there is no news,
this world is a ghost and this
town is lined with almosts-
almost bearable, almost better,
almost less broken than before

Almost a ghost

that she is wringing her hands to,
you are cleaning the car to the sound
of superstition, of chainsaws gutting
and they are cutting through
and the

silence is not silence anymore.

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sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07
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1 posted 2006-11-08 03:43 PM


Allysa this is very very nice. I love the analogies in this and the ending is magnificent! Very nice indeed

Rich

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