Open Poetry #39 |
One Moonbeam Shy |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
One Moonbeam Shy ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~*~ ~One teensy, One weensy, tiniest, little Moonbeam shy of total realize That my lovely Luna has phased full A crowded life in the busy of making Just kept me from this breathtaking View of her softest September adorn Yet, I will stay the night of ebon sky To catch a glimpse as she wanes by I know full well in October swell She will come and beckon me To gaze upon her light Once more~ *For Enchantress, turnabout is fair light* ~Thank you for inspiring me on this moonie~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - [email protected] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Marge!! You have gifted me with a most lovely luna write! Make sure you see her tonight... she is most beautiful at this time of year. Thank you again dear lady~ Love you...Nancy |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
At 6 AM I sat at my dining room table looking out our big window to the west. Just as though it'd been framed for me, that big golden ball was suspended beyond our maple tree branches reach. The beauty brimmed my eyes with tears. I'm glad you captured it with such a lovely word picture. Rae |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Very nice. looks like me full and round. And a night person.. lol |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Fantastic!!!!!!!! You are a wonder! Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Friends~ I DID spend the best part of last evening under the moonbeams of this GORGEOUS phasing~ Thank you all for enjoying her with me~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
I am often in awe of the many phases and beauty of the "Seas of Tranquility"---as much as I am in awe of your beautiful pennings...... |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
You've done it again Marge. You are such an Imspiration for the people at pip and me. Thank you and Hugs Kimberly |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautifully written Marge. Enchantress must be pleased. believe in what your heart feels... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
it's just a delight Marge... watch those moonbeams you could get a moonburn... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
it's a luna moon...and Margie is as always the lady of promise and dreams come true magnificant write |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Ah Marge, A full moon only serves to make me loony-toones. Wonderful post! INclan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Sorry about that but I borrowed that one moonbeam the other day. LOL |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Beautiful Marge |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
The moon is beautiful ALL the time, but I think autumn adds that little extra something to make it magical. sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Howdjoo doodat so blame gud??????? Yougots magics! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
So lovely. I planted the moonbeam in my memory garden and watered it with your poetry. aziza |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ohhh so beautiful Marge...LOVELY |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And it is only but a few weeks away, again... Now catch it in October, Marge, when the Harvest Moon becomes its finest light... |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautiful marge~ been gone too darn long. miss ya and all others, got a new computer and new email addy. shall send to you~ My spirit will rise |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Marge it is always a pleasure to come into these rooms and read your beautiful poetry. |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
This is lovely and to create the structure is a talent within itself. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My stars (or moons) .. it is a pleasure to see how much you all seem to be enjoying this little offering~ As you all know .. I am in Luna's Light and write to share~ Thank you for letting me know you enjoy it~ I ADORE the *gift* of 'shape-structured' poetry, it seems to like to romp so freely in my ink~ I appreciate each thoughtful reply~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You do know that I think of you now, each time I see a full moon? *S* Beautiful work, dear lady! *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetestSUTHERNGal~ Thankee gal~ I'm sure gonna be looking for that October full moon~ She has some ink that I want to spill~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful.indeed. |
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