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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Will you remember me?! In the crimson sunrise..... When the world's new promise And all fair dreams arise.... Will you remember me?! In the flaming sunset.... When the world is mellow And all long cares depart..... Will you remember me?! In the spring's first blossom.... When the world renews And all old 'hurts' unwind.... Will you remember me?! In the summer's sunshine..... When the world seems young And all new hopes unfurl..... Will you remember me?! In the Autumn's passion..... When the world retreats And all warm feelings change.... Will you remember me?! In the Winter’s sadness..... When the world reflects And all old wounds reopen.... Will you remember me?! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS IN POETRY BRUCE! What a beautifully romantic piece you have chosen as your entrance piece. Remember you? Indeed with writing like this we most certainly will! I am so looking forward to reading more of your work! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ No spring, nor summer beauty |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions. This is awesome! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
~sighin here~ I feel the sadness within each word. Welcome to writing in blue, where we just might abbreviate your pen name if that is ok, for our replies.   |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, BruceE (pun) naw, that isn't quite right either. Now I'll be waiting for some nature writes, so please don't disappoint me.  Thanks for the email. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 Lovely entrance post !! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dear "Poet" [as our Pipsters seem to be trying to abbreviate you in kindly ways] What a great new way to begin your time here. I hope that your experiences within our ever expanding walls is enlightening, and I hope that you will enjoy, as I did, your poem, within a Very Special Greeting. Please, check your email soon. Welcome, poet, to Passions! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 nicewelcome to Passions!! |
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um_idk Junior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 32minnesota |
nice i liked it alot |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nothing'Second-hand'AboutYou~  My friend ... welcome to this ever-growing circle of friends and poets ... of which you are BOTH~ This is just loverly, and you are a welcomed addition to the circle~ May we hold hands ? Of course we may ~ Delighted to have you here~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is a beautiful first entrance post! For everything there is a season yes? I love the way you have incorporated the seasons into this write. It fell down the page so smoothly. I enjoyed your first post and will be looking forward to many more. I hope you enjoy your time here in these pages of blue as you get to know our words, and in return we become familiar with yours.  |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
so beautiful one. I love this. you will be remebered for all your beautiful poems. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Just because some things bear remembering~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I see what you mean. So, was this your very first post? Beautiful and sad. Ida |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
YES....... |
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