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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2006-11-07 06:15 PM


Will you remember me?!

In the crimson sunrise.....
When the world's new promise
And all fair dreams arise....
Will you remember me?!

In the flaming sunset....
When the world is mellow
And all long cares depart.....
Will you remember me?!

In the spring's first blossom....
When the world renews
And all old 'hurts' unwind....
Will you remember me?!

In the summer's sunshine.....
When the world seems young
And all new hopes unfurl.....
Will you remember me?!

In the Autumn's passion.....
When the world retreats
And all warm feelings change....
Will you remember me?!

In the Winter’s sadness.....
When the world reflects
And all old wounds reopen....
Will you remember me?!


© Copyright 2006 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-11-07 06:55 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS IN POETRY BRUCE!
What a beautifully romantic piece you have chosen as your entrance piece.
Remember you?  Indeed with writing like this we most certainly will!
I am so looking forward to reading more of your work!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

No spring, nor summer beauty
hath such grace...
As I have seen in one autumnal face.
                                    

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2006-11-07 07:00 PM


Welcome to Passions.  This is awesome!
Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2006-11-07 08:22 PM


~sighin here~ I feel the sadness within each word. Welcome to writing in blue, where we just might abbreviate your pen name if that is ok, for our replies.   
Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2006-11-07 09:24 PM


LOL, BruceE (pun) naw, that isn't quite right either.
Now I'll be waiting for some nature writes, so please don't disappoint me.

Thanks for the email.

Nightshade
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just out of reach
5 posted 2006-11-07 10:32 PM




Lovely entrance post !!

Sunshine
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6 posted 2006-11-07 10:43 PM



Dear "Poet" [as our Pipsters seem
to be trying to abbreviate you in kindly ways]

What a great new way to begin your time here.  I hope that your experiences within our ever expanding walls is enlightening, and I hope that you will enjoy, as I did, your poem,

within a Very Special Greeting.  Please, check your email soon.

Welcome, poet, to Passions!


passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2006-11-07 11:23 PM


nice

welcome to Passions!!

um_idk
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minnesota
8 posted 2006-11-08 01:41 AM


nice i liked it alot
Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2006-11-08 07:58 AM


Nothing'Second-hand'AboutYou~

My friend ... welcome to this ever-growing circle of friends and poets ... of which you are BOTH~

This is just loverly, and you are a welcomed addition to the circle~

May we hold hands ?
Of course we may ~
Delighted to have you here~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -         noles1@totcon.com     

Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2006-11-08 08:02 AM


This is a beautiful first entrance post!  For everything there is a season yes?  I love the way you have incorporated the seasons into this write. It fell down the page so smoothly. I enjoyed your first post and will be looking forward to many more. I hope you enjoy your time here in these pages of blue as you get to know our words, and in return we become familiar with yours.
Drauntz
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11 posted 2007-05-17 07:07 PM


so beautiful one. I love this. you will be remebered for all your beautiful poems.
Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
12 posted 2007-06-02 10:31 PM



Just because some things bear remembering~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -               noles1@totcon.com

Marchmadness
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13 posted 2007-10-14 07:44 PM


I see what you mean. So, was this your very first post? Beautiful and sad.
                              Ida

Midnitesun
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Gaia
14 posted 2007-11-10 11:03 PM


YES.......
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