Open Poetry #39 |
Forever Green |
A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Evening sun peeks, shinning through, your evergreen branches. Forever you stand tall, strong, alive, season throughout season. You remain the same, never changeing, forever green. I can trust you, placing my security, my life, in your hands. For you will never leave me, nor forsake me, I look for you, you are there. Faithful, true, never dying, as all other trees do, you live forever. Forever green, my tree of salvation, the love of my life, The father of creation, the love of Jesus Christ, your love is evergreen. You are the pine tree, my favorite tree, tallest tree inside the forest of my heart. [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (09-09-2006 03:28 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
I enjoyed this. You missed an 'r' in the title. Rae |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
"You are the pine tree, my favorite tree, tallest tree inside the forest of my heart." My favourite here, among the rest. enjoyed. |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Nicely done, ARH, I love trees immensely - they are the breath we take. CG |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MzRomanticHeart~ BEAUTIMOUS !!!! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Sounds like you are describing the Yew tree? But so well thought out through metaphor, thank you for this poem... Goldenrose. |
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