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Open Poetry #39

[I cannot climb]

shirtless
Member

since 2006-04-29

Posts 359

0 posted 2006-11-07 01:04 PM

I cannot climb
this ladder
of smoke
in these shoes
of lead

so I am
unlacing
the shoes
and giving
the ladder
to the wind

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2006-11-07 01:06 PM

Oh my! Excellent! I like the feel, the construction, the whole thing.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2006-11-14 04:39 AM

enjoyed this - the visual was very powerful

Be well
Roniece

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