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G.G.T Ismail
New Member

since 2006-04-04

Posts 9

0 posted 2006-11-07 06:02 AM

Aroused , sweet scented mystery
Enchanted, because it felt better
Than my previous misery
One heartbeat for her
A dozen for me
I was levitated to the sky
From the clouds in the 7th heaven
Oceanic view, a Lightblue sea
Attraction was felt
both physical as sexual
Could not express my joy
When the feelings seemed mutual
Time goes by, defeated all fears
Sunlight fades, feelings dissapear
Day and night become one
I was once levitated
Now i am back on the floor
What was once called love
is now no more!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-11-07 07:19 AM

but isn't it wonderful that the journey doesn't really end, but begins anew eventually?

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2006-11-07 07:46 AM

I really liked this. Sometimes our journey takes us to places for healing, as a prelude to the next stop. We often think we have landed, only to realize a momentary pause to the next celestial doorway.
Welcome to Passions.

gypsyheartx
Member

since 2006-02-09

Posts 104
Istanbul-Turkey/U.S.-Maryland

3 posted 2006-11-07 12:42 PM

I loved this... love does lift you, yet it can also be the quickest to bring you down. Welcome to passions, I can't wait to see more

~Miranda~

*Cabuk parlayan cabuk soner*
-What flares up fast, extinguishes soon...-

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2006-11-07 01:03 PM

What a difference a day makes.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2006-11-07 09:35 PM

Yep, dangling in midair has many drawbacks, one of which is the inevitable landing.

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

6 posted 2006-11-09 09:36 PM

I must dance the ‘Shakespeherian Rag’ when I read this poem!:
Ah.....the bittersweet ‘slings and arrows of (love’s) outrageous fortunes’; etc.!
Likely a strong sense of ‘love-dejavu’ when most any of us contemplates this work:
“love’s illusions every one”....and so forth!...the Kafkaesque delaceration of the heart!.....One might feel sorrow and longing when readin’ this...but you certainly cant’ help but feel ‘alive’ because of it!

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